A Powerful Rival - Revision history

>DogLover314 at 15:18, 7 April 2020

2020-04-07T15:18:53Z

>DogLover314 at 15:18, 7 April 2020

2020-04-07T15:18:53Z

>DogLover314 at 15:18, 7 April 2020

2020-04-07T15:18:53Z

>DogLover314 at 15:18, 7 April 2020

2020-04-07T15:18:53Z

>DogLover314 at 15:18, 7 April 2020

2020-04-07T15:18:53Z

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:50Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:50Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:50Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:50Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:50Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

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 {{ST|Lazry}} Blimey, lass, no! No corners cut here! But if I were to put me all into a weapon, she'd be too much for a regular person. Ye lassies'll see what I mean once I'm done forgin' me weapon here.
 {{ST|Ramona}} Pffft. SOMEBODY'S confident today. But yeah, sure—show us what you got.
-{{ST|The Prince}} Whoa, that forge is BLAZING hot! Lazry's going to burst into flame if he stands any closer! ...And yet, he's not even sweating. Plus, look at him—he's swinging that massive hammer with one arm!
+{{ST|The Prince}} Whoa, that forge is BLAZING hot! Lazry's going to burst into flame if she stands any closer! ...And yet, she's not even sweating. Plus, look at her—she's swinging that massive hammer with one arm!
 {{ST|Ranzal}} Yeah, rokka folk are sturdy, all right. For them, heat like this is like a mild spring day for you'n me. Plus their fingers are long and deft, and they got muscles to spare. They were pretty much born to smith.
 {{ST|Rena}} There's almost something...beautiful about watching Lazry work.
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 {{ST|Ramona}} ...... That sword was... It was amazing. I've never seen anything like it...
 {{ST|Renee}} Y-yeah, but OUR sword is still better! I mean...um...right?
-{{ST|Rena}} Come on now, you two. Let's put on our happy faces. It's quite possible we can't beat Lazry now. But in that case, we'll just figure out how to beat him another day! We've done good work up until now, but we still have room to improve.
+{{ST|Rena}} Come on now, you two. Let's put on our happy faces. It's quite possible we can't beat Lazry now. But in that case, we'll just figure out how to beat her another day! We've done good work up until now, but we still have room to improve.
 {{ST|Ramona}} Yeah, but HOW do we improve? Ain't like we can just snap our fingers and be better smiths.
 {{ST|Rena}} Well, I was thinking about something Dad said to me once... Apparently, when he was young, he ran into much the same situation as we find ourselves in now.

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 {{ST|Rena}} It's going to look the same as it did the last nineteen times you checked. Don't worry, Renee—it's going to be fine.
 {{ST|Ramona}} We let everything out on the forge, so let's walk in with our heads high.
-{{ST|Euden}} Wait, what's going on at the huge hearth outside that building?
+{{ST|The Prince}} Wait, what's going on at the huge hearth outside that building?
 {{ST|Ranzal}} That there's a rokkan smithin' hearth. Thing gets hotter'n any hearth around, but they can't fit it inside what 'cause it's so damn big.
-{{ST|Euden}} So does that mean...?
+{{ST|The Prince}} So does that mean...?
 {{ST|Ramona}} Yep. That's Lazry's forge.
 <center>''Lazry's Forge
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 {{ST|Lazry}} Blimey, lass, no! No corners cut here! But if I were to put me all into a weapon, she'd be too much for a regular person. Ye lassies'll see what I mean once I'm done forgin' me weapon here.
 {{ST|Ramona}} Pffft. SOMEBODY'S confident today. But yeah, sure—show us what you got.
-{{ST|Euden}} Whoa, that forge is BLAZING hot! Lazry's going to burst into flame if he stands any closer! ...And yet, he's not even sweating. Plus, look at him—he's swinging that massive hammer with one arm!
+{{ST|The Prince}} Whoa, that forge is BLAZING hot! Lazry's going to burst into flame if he stands any closer! ...And yet, he's not even sweating. Plus, look at him—he's swinging that massive hammer with one arm!
 {{ST|Ranzal}} Yeah, rokka folk are sturdy, all right. For them, heat like this is like a mild spring day for you'n me. Plus their fingers are long and deft, and they got muscles to spare. They were pretty much born to smith.
 {{ST|Rena}} There's almost something...beautiful about watching Lazry work.
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 {{ST|Ranzal}} This sword could chop a dragon in half! I mean, if ya could WIELD the damn thing.
 {{ST|Lazry}} Aye, she can be wielded, all right... by a ROKKAN warrior.
-{{ST|Euden}} So that's what you meant when you said a regular person couldn't handle it.
+{{ST|The Prince}} So that's what you meant when you said a regular person couldn't handle it.
 {{ST|Lazry}} Aye. But for a weapon being entered in the competition, ye don't really need to worry 'bout that sort'a thing. Whew! That plum tuckered me out, it did. Time to take me a little nap.
 {{ST|Ramona}} ...... That sword was... It was amazing. I've never seen anything like it...
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 {{ST|Ramona}} Only a loser would throw in the towel now—and I sure as hell ain't no loser!
 {{ST|Rena}} Hee hee! Oh, it's good to see my sisters back to their usual fiery selves.
-{{ST|Euden}} I'd like to help with this plan as well. After all, the better you get, the more it ends up improving all of us. So if you'll have me, ladies, lead the way to the volcano!
+{{ST|The Prince}} I'd like to help with this plan as well. After all, the better you get, the more it ends up improving all of us. So if you'll have me, ladies, lead the way to the volcano!
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