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>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:47Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:47Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:47Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:47Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Canim44: Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

2020-02-22T22:13:47Z

Text replacement - "{{ST|Euden}}" to "{{ST|The Prince}}"

>Mornsta-gpuser at 14:37, 21 March 2019

2019-03-21T14:37:08Z

>Mornsta-gpuser at 14:37, 21 March 2019

2019-03-21T14:37:08Z

>Mornsta-gpuser at 14:37, 21 March 2019

2019-03-21T14:37:08Z

>Mornsta-gpuser at 14:37, 21 March 2019

2019-03-21T14:37:08Z

>Mornsta-gpuser at 14:37, 21 March 2019

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 |Dialogue=<div align="left">{{ST|???}} Such...a terrifying plan. At this rate, something terrible will... I must...tell them. They must not try to rescue me!
 {{ST|Elisanne}} Your Highness, you must hurry to the castle gate at once!
-{{ST|Euden}} What's wrong, Elly?
+{{ST|The Prince}} What's wrong, Elly?
 {{ST|Elisanne}} A sylvan girl has come seeking aid. Apparently the Empire occupied a nearby village and she just managed to escape.
-{{ST|Euden}} Got it. Let's go see what we can do.
+{{ST|The Prince}} Got it. Let's go see what we can do.
 {{ST|???}} Please, Highness, you must save my village. I beg it of you!
 <center>''The sylvan girl's name is Melsa, and her village was recently overrun by the Empire.''</center> Because they surrendered as soon as the attack began, there were few lives lost, and the village's absorption into the Empire was largely peaceful.
-{{ST|Euden}} ...Well, I'm glad to hear there wasn't further damage done. But we still have to come up with a battle plan and retake the village. But first, are you okay? You seem exhausted. It looks like you might collapse at any second.
+{{ST|The Prince}} ...Well, I'm glad to hear there wasn't further damage done. But we still have to come up with a battle plan and retake the village. But first, are you okay? You seem exhausted. It looks like you might collapse at any second.
 {{ST|Melsa}} I am well. It's merely that I ran all the way here without eating or drinking anything. ...Er, for roughly two days.
-{{ST|Euden}} Two days?! That's awful! You need to rest in the castle before we do anything else.
+{{ST|The Prince}} Two days?! That's awful! You need to rest in the castle before we do anything else.
 {{ST|Melsa}} No. What's most important is that we hurry and save my village. Now let me show... Let me show you the... Ooooh... ...Hmm? Why am I in bed?
-{{ST|Euden}} Oh, good. You're awake.
+{{ST|The Prince}} Oh, good. You're awake.
 {{ST|Melsa}} Wait. I remember now. I came to the castle to beg your assistance, and then... Oh, no! I can't just be lying about! We must make for the village at once!
-{{ST|Euden}} Easy there! You still need to rest. You can guide us to the village once you're able to move again. I understand why you're in such a hurry, but your village is still standing, and we need to prepare carefully if we're going to successfully liberate it. And on that note, I'll take care of making preparations for our departure. Think you can handle it from here, Sarisse?
+{{ST|The Prince}} Easy there! You still need to rest. You can guide us to the village once you're able to move again. I understand why you're in such a hurry, but your village is still standing, and we need to prepare carefully if we're going to successfully liberate it. And on that note, I'll take care of making preparations for our departure. Think you can handle it from here, Sarisse?
 {{ST|Sarisse}} Yep! I just brought some food, so we're all good here. Okay, you. Time to chow down and start regaining that lost strength.
 {{ST|Melsa}} ...I suppose you're right. I apologize for being so overeager. Oh, and I am Melsa. Might I ask your name?
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 {{ST|Melsa}} He's right, Sarisse. You will face grave danger if you accompany us.
 {{ST|Sarisse}} Which is exactly WHY I'm coming! I can't just sit around eating bon-bons while my bestie is in danger. Plus, I can fight fiends. ...Tell her, Luca. Tell her how good I am with a bow.
-{{ST|Euden}} I can vouch for that. I've even heard Luca say Sarisse might be a better archer than he is—which is saying something.
+{{ST|The Prince}} I can vouch for that. I've even heard Luca say Sarisse might be a better archer than he is—which is saying something.
 {{ST|Luca}} Okay, let's not go overboard here... Anyway, it doesn't matter now. Once my sister's mind is made up, there's no way to change it.
 {{ST|Sarisse}} I wonder who I get THAT from?!
-{{ST|Euden}} In that case, it's time for us to go. Our destination lies deep in those woods. </div>
+{{ST|The Prince}} In that case, it's time for us to go. Our destination lies deep in those woods. </div>
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 |ThumbnailImage=20402_01
 |Summary=The Empire has taken control of a sylvan village nestled deep in the woods—but a young girl named Melsa manages to escape and comes to the Halidom seeking aid. Under her guidance, the prince's retinue makes its way toward the besieged town.
-|Dialogue={{ST|???}}Such...a terrifying plan.
+|Dialogue=<div align="left">{{ST|???}} Such...a terrifying plan. At this rate, something terrible will... I must...tell them. They must not try to rescue me!
-At this rate, something terrible will... I must... tell them.
+{{ST|Elisanne}} Your Highness, you must hurry to the castle gate at once!
-They must not try to rescue me!
+{{ST|Euden}} What's wrong, Elly?
-{{ST|Elisanne}}Your Highness, you must hurry to the castle gate at once!
+{{ST|Elisanne}} A sylvan girl has come seeking aid. Apparently the Empire occupied a nearby village and she just managed to escape.
-{{ST|Euden}}What's wrong, Elly?
+{{ST|Euden}} Got it. Let's go see what we can do.
-{{ST|Elisanne}}A sylvan girl has come seeking aid.
+{{ST|???}} Please, Highness, you must save my village. I beg it of you!
-Apparently the Empire occupied a nearby village and she just managed to escape.
+<center>''The sylvan girl's name is Melsa, and her village was recently overrun by the Empire.''</center> Because they surrendered as soon as the attack began, there were few lives lost, and the village's absorption into the Empire was largely peaceful.
-{{ST|Euden}}Got it. Let's go see what we can do.
+{{ST|Euden}} ...Well, I'm glad to hear there wasn't further damage done. But we still have to come up with a battle plan and retake the village. But first, are you okay? You seem exhausted. It looks like you might collapse at any second.
-{{ST|???}}Please, Highness, you must save my village. I beg it of you!
+{{ST|Melsa}} I am well. It's merely that I ran all the way here without eating or drinking anything. ...Er, for roughly two days.
-<center>''[[Melsa|"Resolute Friend: Melsa"]]''</center>
+{{ST|Euden}} Two days?! That's awful! You need to rest in the castle before we do anything else.
-<center>
+{{ST|Melsa}} No. What's most important is that we hurry and save my village. Now let me show... Let me show you the... Ooooh... ...Hmm? Why am I in bed?
-The sylvan girl's name is Melsa, and her village was recently overrun by the Empire.
+{{ST|Euden}} Oh, good. You're awake.
-Because they surrendered as soon as the attack began, there were few lives lost, and the village's absorption into the Empire was largely peaceful.
+{{ST|Melsa}} Wait. I remember now. I came to the castle to beg your assistance, and then... Oh, no! I can't just be lying about! We must make for the village at once!
-</center>
+{{ST|Euden}} Easy there! You still need to rest. You can guide us to the village once you're able to move again. I understand why you're in such a hurry, but your village is still standing, and we need to prepare carefully if we're going to successfully liberate it. And on that note, I'll take care of making preparations for our departure. Think you can handle it from here, Sarisse?
-{{ST|Euden}}...Well, I'm glad to hear there wasn't further damage done. But we still have to come up with a battle plan and retake the village.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Yep! I just brought some food, so we're all good here. Okay, you. Time to chow down and start regaining that lost strength.
-But first, are you okay?
+{{ST|Melsa}} ...I suppose you're right. I apologize for being so overeager. Oh, and I am Melsa. Might I ask your name?
-You seem exhausted. It looks like you might collapse at any second.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Sarisse! And lemme tell ya, Melsa, it's nice to have another sylvan around.
-{{ST|Melsa}}I am well. It's merely that I ran all the way here without eating or drinking anything. ...Er, for roughly two days.
+{{ST|Melsa}} Oh, um, yes. You are a sylvan, aren't you?
-{{ST|Euden}}Two days?! That's awful! You need to rest in the castle before we do anything else.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} HELLOOOO! Check the giant ears! C'mon, it couldn't BE more obvious.
-{{ST|Melsa}}No. What's most important is that we hurry and save my village. Now let me show... Let me show you the...
+{{ST|Melsa}} No, of course. I merely was surprised to find another of my kind here. The people in my village hardly ever leave its borders, so...
-Ooooh...
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Oh yeah, my village is the same way. I think that's standard sylvan behavior. But Luca—he's my brother—says that custom is super dated and old-fashioned. So that's why he left town, made friends with the prince, and got us a sweet gig here at the Halidom.
-{{ST|Melsa}}...Hmmm? Why am I in bed?
+{{ST|Melsa}} Remarkable. I fear that I could never be quite so proactive.
-{{ST|Euden}}Oh, good. You're awake.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Aw, it's nothing that impressive. Honestly, my brother's a big idiot. There's no telling WHAT ridiculous thing he might do if I wasn't around. I'm actually here to keep an eye on him so our parents don't worry themselves into a coma.
-{{ST|Melsa}}Wait. I remember now. I came to the castle to beg your assistance, and then...
+{{ST|Melsa}} You're a very kind person, Sarisse.
-Oh, no! I can't just be lying about! We must make for the village at once!
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Huh? What? No! Knock it off! I mean, Luca's always going off about what a crude dude I am! Anyway, if anyone is kind here, it's you!
-{{ST|Euden}}Easy there! You still need to rest. You can gudie us to the village once you're able to move again.
+{{ST|Melsa}} Oh? Do you really think so?
-I understand why you're in such a hurry, but your village is still standing, and we need to prepare carefully if we're going to successfully liberate it.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Girl, you ran and ran for two straight days to help your village! I could never do something like that; my little stick legs would totally give out first. So quit talking about how remarkable my dumb brother is and start talking yourself up a little, maybe.
-And on that note, I'll take care of mking preparations for our departure. Think you can handle it from here, Sarisse?
+{{ST|Melsa}} Two days... Augh, that's right! I can't believe so much time has passed since the Empire attacked! I can sit here and converse no longer; I must leave at once!
-{{ST|Sarisse}}Yep! I just brought some food, so we're all good here.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Hey, Melsa! Waaaait!
-Okay, you. Time to chow and start regaining that lost strength.
+{{ST|Melsa}} *pant* *pant* Can't catch...my breath...
-{{ST|Melsa}}...I suppose you're right. I apologize for being so overeager.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} That's because you're still on death's door, weirdo! Now get back to your room and take that rest already.
-Oh, and I am Melsa. Might I ask your name?
+{{ST|Melsa}} Well, I...guess that would be best.
-{{ST|Sarisse}}Sarisse! Am lemme tell ya Melsa, it's nice to have another sylvan around.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Look, I know how hard you struggled to make it all the way here, Melsa. But you don't have to do all this alone, okay? If you need help, just ask me!
-{{ST|Melsa}}Oh, um, yes. You're a sylvan, aren't you?
+{{ST|Melsa}} Thank you. But I will be all right. Still, I've been nothing but trouble for you since I got here, and for that I apologize.
-{{ST|Sarisse}}HELLOOOO! Check the giant ears! C'mon, it couldn't BE more obvious.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} You sure do apologize a lot... Oh, hey! I've got an idea! Let's become besties!
-{{ST|Melsa}}No, of course. I merely was surprised to find another of my kind here.
+{{ST|Melsa}} Er..."besties"?
-The people in my village hardly ever leave its borders, so...
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Yeah! If we're besties, then you can stop acting all formal and apologizing for everything all the time!
-{{ST|Sarisse}}Oh yeah, my village is the same way. I think that's standard sylvan behavior.
+{{ST|Melsa}} But...my coming to this castle was...
-But Luca — he's my brother — says that custom is super dated and old-fashioned.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Don't you WANT to be besties with me?
-So that's why he left town, made friends with the prince, and got us a sweet gig here at the Halidom.
+{{ST|Melsa}} N-no! Er, I mean, yes! Wait, I mean... Oh, this is coming out all wrong. It would be lovely to be your friend, Sarisse. Or even your "bestie."
-{{ST|Melsa}}Remarkable. I fear that I could never be quite so proactive.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Great! Then from here on out, you and me are best friends!
-{{ST|Sarisse}}Aw, it's nothing that impressive. Honestly, my brother's a big idiot.
+{{ST|Melsa}} Best friends it is, then. Thank you, Sarisse.
-There's no telling WHAT ridiculous thing he might do if I wasn't around.
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Pleasure's all mine, bud!
-I'm actually here to keep an eye on him so our parents don't worry themselves into a coma.
+<center>''The Next Day''</center>
-{{ST|Melsa}}You're very kind person, Sarisse.
+{{ST|Melsa}} Thanks to all of you, I have recovered and can now guide you to my village.
-{{ST|Sarisse}}Huh? What? No! Knock it off!
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Meeeelsa! Waaait! I'm coming too!
-I mean, Luca's always going off about what a crude dude I am!
+{{ST|Luca}} You realize this isn't some happy field trip, right, Sis?
-Anyway, if anyone is kind here, it's you!
+{{ST|Melsa}} He's right, Sarisse. You will face grave danger if you accompany us.
-{{ST|Melsa}}Oh? Do you really think so?
+{{ST|Sarisse}} Which is exactly WHY I'm coming! I can't just sit around eating bon-bons while my bestie is in danger. Plus, I can fight fiends. ...Tell her, Luca. Tell her how good I am with a bow.
-{{ST|Sarisse}}Girl, you ran and ran for two straight days to help your village! I could never do something like that; my little stick legs would totally give out first.
+{{ST|Euden}} I can vouch for that. I've even heard Luca say Sarisse might be a better archer than he is—which is saying something.
-So quit talking about how remarkable my dumb brother is and start talking yourself up a little, maybe.
+{{ST|Luca}} Okay, let's not go overboard here... Anyway, it doesn't matter now. Once my sister's mind is made up, there's no way to change it.
-{{ST|Melsa}}Two days... Augh, tht's right! I can't believe so much time has passed since the Empire attacked!
+{{ST|Sarisse}} I wonder who I get THAT from?!
-I can sit here and converse no longer; I must leave at once!
+{{ST|Euden}} In that case, it's time for us to go. Our destination lies deep in those woods. </div>
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